For the picture of the girl, I'm going to change it to a picture of me. I'm pretty sure that I'll be adding more detail to this since it seems really plain right now. Again, this is only a rough draft. (:
I really like how you had that "light" part because in your poem you had said you seen the bright light and you walked into it. I'm looking forward for your final product when you add your own picture and more details (:
I absolutely agree with Alex. You were surrounded by darkness and had an open heart to walk into the light. It was the first thing that came to mind and it matches your allusion perfectly. I also like the text. It reminded me of the lost sheep. Good job on this rough draft. Hope to see the outcome of the graphic. ^^
I really like how you had that "light" part because in your poem you had said you seen the bright light and you walked into it. I'm looking forward for your final product when you add your own picture and more details (:
ReplyDeleteHi Sharmaine. Sorry this is late.
ReplyDeleteI absolutely agree with Alex. You were surrounded by darkness and had an open heart to walk into the light. It was the first thing that came to mind and it matches your allusion perfectly. I also like the text. It reminded me of the lost sheep. Good job on this rough draft. Hope to see the outcome of the graphic. ^^