Monday, April 26, 2010

Sci-Fi Essay Draft: Science and Technology on the Rise

Science fiction is a certain genre of fiction in which the stories often associate with the science and technology of the future. It is very different from fantasy and more related to science, hence the name "science fiction". Everything pictured in sci-fi is something we all want to know about. It is an incubator for imaginative minds to create visions that help us to glimpse not only into the future, but also something about ourselves in the present. Science fiction exists because authors and screenwriters want to show us the possibilities we may have in the future that may affect our society positively or negatively.

Emphasizing the importance of science breakthroughs along with its potential consequences is one of the things all sci-fi writers do in their work to make a good science fiction story. It helps the audience to see and understand what might these advances can do to either help us or hurt us. In the movie, I Am Legend, the one science breakthrough was finding a vaccine for cancer. But the cancer vaccine that could have helped millions and millions of people, turned into a huge tragedy, mutating and infecting those cancer patients into blood-thirsty monsters who make it hard for the main character to live a normal life. That was not the only negative consequence of the vaccine. It also turned cancer into an airborne disease. The main character, played by Will Smith, was immune to it and was determined to find a cure for the infected. In the end, he accomplished his goal. Wall-E also has its variety of science breakthroughs, from hover chairs to automated pilots. And as always, along with these breakthroughs comes consequences. The hover chairs in Wall-E helped the people get to their destinations faster, but also made them lazy to walk. And over the years, the people began to gain weight and get bigger due to lack of movement and exercise. The auto pilot had the same effects on the captain as well. It forced the captain to form a lethargic attitude, making him lazy to steer and control the space ship himself. I Am Legend and Wall-E are two great movies that document the consequences of certain science breakthroughs.

Another element in good science fiction that authors and screenwriters highlight in their work is the technological advances in science and technology. Movies like Avatar and Iron Man, and short stories like "There Will Come Soft Rains" show and tell us about certain technological advances that may be a possibility in the future. In Avatar, scientists grew and created Na'vi-human hybrid bodies called avatars. The scientific developers of these hybrid bodies combined the genes of the Na'vi and the genes of humans. The avatars are operated via mental link by genetically matching the DNA. This is a great example of an advance in technology. Also, Iron Man has a certain technological advance that is being developed right now. It is, of course, the bionic suit. In the movie, the main character, played by Robert Downey Jr, is an industrialist and master engineer who builds a powered exoskeleton also known as the bionic suit. He then becomes the technologically advanced superhero, Iron Man. "There Will Come Soft Rains" by Ray Bradbury is a science fictional story that tells about an automated home that is fully unaware of the inhabitants' absence after they have died in a nuclear war. The robotic house makes breakfast, disposes of the untouched breakfast, and performs various domestic tasks (most of the time using robot mice to clean the home), before it finally burns down in a fire started by a fallen tree limb. All of Ray Bradbury's sci-fi stories puts things into perspective for me. When I read his stories, he really makes me think about how the future will be like.

Every science fiction story and movie always need a convincing plot/conflict and resolution (a.k.a. storyline) that has enticing action and suspense. This is what all sci-fi writers try to create and it is what really grabs the attention of the audience. Without a persuasive storyline, the audience won't be riveted or impressed. Movies that I think have convincing plots and resolutions are The Day After Tomorrow and I Am Legend. The Day After Tomorrow is such a sad movie that helped me to realize what is happening in our world today. The screenwriter focuses on global warming and air pollution, and how it can affect our world later in the future if we don't do anything about it now. In the movie, it starts off in the Arctic. The scientists there were observing the changes in climate of the Arctic. They noticed that the ice was beginning to melt and crack easily, proving that global warming is present on our planet today. It soon began to affect different parts of the globe causing worldwide natural disasters and developed the worst ice age in the history of the world. The movie finishes with the ice age melting away from the face of the Earth. I Am Legend is truly one of the best movies I have seen in a long time, from the cinematography to the storyline. While watching it, I always felt a sense of intensity. I kept yearning to know what would happen next. The movie kept me on edge the whole time while I was watching it.

Science fiction is all around us; in movies, books, magazines, etc. They all foretell what might become of our society's future, our planet's future, and even our universe's future. There are good and bad ramifications with science and technology pictured in sci-fi everywhere, from mutating cancer vaccines to hybrid bodies controlled through mental links by genetically matching DNA. The world around us is changing and we are probably going to depend more on technology as the years go by. Everything that makes up good science fiction are emphases on the importance of science breakthrough (including their consequences), superb technological advances/scientific breakthroughs, and always, a convincing and believable storyline (plot/conflict and resolution). These elements help the audience to become aware of the things happening in the world right now that may lead to either a bright or dark future.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Shaaarmaine !

    I will be commenting on your Sci-fi essay draft (:

    Intro: I really like the way you introduced what science fiction is, and the example you gave for it: “It is an incubator for imaginative minds to create visions that help us to glimpse not only the future, but also something about ourselves in the present.” That was totally cool, I can kind of imagine it. Hahah.

    Body: Your examples are great for every movie you mentioned: I am legend, The Day After Tomorrow, Wall-E, Iron Man, Avatar, and There Will Come Soft Rains, especially when you tell a little summary, the scientific breakthrough & technology in the movie/poem, like the vaccine for cancer, the hovering chairs, global warming, Na’vi-human hybrid bodies, the bionic suit, and the robotic house. It’s creative how you used a variety of science breakthroughs to explain your perspective of what makes good sci-fi.

    Conclusion: You closed everything well! I love this sentence you used, “They all foretell what might become of our society's future, our planet's future, and even our universe's future.” And it is true that the world is changing and how we probably are going to depends more on technology in the future. (“The world around us is changing and we are probably going to depend more on technology as the years go by.”)

    Overall: I love your essay! You have a good introductions and conclusion to sci-fi and what it is in your perspective, you give good examples, and your transitions flow nicely. I have no suggestions for it whatsoever. Hahah. I would’ve suggested shortening the summary of the movies a little bit but I know it’s going to take away a lot about how sci-fi is presented in the movies/poems. Oh wells, hhaha JOB WELL DONE SHARMAINE!

    Good luck on the final sci-fi essay ;]

    -Shannel :D

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  2. Heeyyyyy Sharmaine.

    Ima gonna comment on your essay now.

    What am i gonna say now???....

    Your thesis in your introduction is well that out. Bravo!O_o. You stated about technology and wether it may have good or bad effects, which is a great explanation about sci-fi.

    In your body, your examples(movies) are explained very well. Just remember that the question, What makes a good science fiction, is a general question and is not a question towards sci-fi movies and books. You want to explain sci-fi in general, its own genre. I would like to see more of the explanation on why? and How? sci-fi can go either way. Focus on the plot/conflict and theme of itself and not only the sci-fi movies and books' conflict and plot and stuff, yeah. Also, with your fabulous(ugh..no body uses that word anymore, but Fabulous movie example, try implementing other present day sci-fi in the world today like spray on solar panels or using a tooth as an eye. Overall, with what you have now, add onto actual sci-fi technological advances going on right now and not just the scifi movies and books.

    With that, your going to have such a loooong essay, still a good thing though.

    so, go on with your life after you read this sentence and my name.

    -Traci Sahagun

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  3. Hi Sharmaine,
    Great job on your essay, clear and convincing. Good incorporation of some of the points brought up in the class discussion, too!
    I agree with Shannel that you might try to make the summaries more concise...that will be good writing practice :)
    And, if your definition of sci fi that appears in the intro contains phrases or sentences that are directly from other sources, be sure to enclose them in quotation marks.
    I'm not sure what Traci means when she advises you to be more general. I actually think your essay has a good balance of general description/characterization of sci-fi and specific examples.
    For trait #6, watch some subject-verb agreement errors...let me know if you need help with this.
    mrs s

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